Comments in People Projectso

Mariana Lozano:
I like how you do all the things togethere, and it is well elaborated. But you have alot of mistakes! This mistakes include grammar,puntuction and you should put Caps instead of all in lower cays. Also I think you had to do a different thing in the project.I think you have to tell how does the character changes during the book. 
Alejandro Samper:  I like how you do steps to describe. I also think taht is very well elaborated and y