lunes, 31 de octubre de 2011

Essay

This topic is really interesting to me because I care a lot about animals and I don’t want for them to extinct. These animals and plants are very important to the world. This topic or organization is very important because it helps us to organize people who are interested in protecting animals, and nature.I care about this topic because it away to protect our sons future. It would be very disappointing to see animals and plants disappearing that’s why I think people should do something about it!.

People all around should also care about this problem because it something they are loosing because of their fault if they don’t do nothing the world would start to be in problems , this includes tree cutting , waste disposal and throwing trash. They should worry that they are loosing things that make part of them. If this animals extinct people would then regret about what they have done. As an example like the video of the wild horses.

Some facts about defending wildlife are that a lot of the endangered species around the world are only found in national parks and there, they have been taken care of the animals. As an example I went to Africa this summer and animals were in Nationals Parks where tourists had to leave at 6 so there would be no Poachers. They say that eventhough they have natural parks, and zoos, it is not enough to prevent species to extinct, to protect this people have to put an effort. . Another reason why wildlife is disappearing is because we humans are destructing their habitat if we as humans destroy it the world would end. What different organizations around the world are doing to help maintain animal’s habitats is to protect lands. These are the only lands in the world that have not been destroyed by humans. 

Literary Techniques

Literary Techniques symbolism: when you use something object as idea( wind like in pochahantas)
Foreshadowing : a hint of what is coming later in the story( cinderella)
Flashback : a story interputed to go a to a earlyier part
Atmosphere the emational condition ( the setting emotions)
Plot twist ( a excepted change)
Progressive time
Meaning: When an author writes the story by stages.


Examples: An example can be in the movie "The wizard of oz" when first Dorothy lands on the Land of Oz and then tries to find the way back home, and finally the Wizard takes her back home.
Digresive time:, 
Its when a character remebers something about the past or makes you give clues-

Suspense: Is when it gives you a certainly clue of scare or something like a mobvie or book. Also you get a bad feeling of something. However I like when movies have suspense

What makes something Persuasive

What make something persuasive is how the author use some techqniques to make you fall into the topic. For example when they show you sad images you feel sorry for the topic and start been persuasive. Also the music the use makes you feel different and impacts you. Therefore they use facts to show how the thing they are trying to persuasive is true. Also they use facts, and music to create emotions towards 
the topic. 

Ethos, Pathos, and Logos

Ethos: someone convinces something
Is being the expert
Pathos is to put emotion in reader
Logos is the facts

domingo, 23 de octubre de 2011

Cheat Sheet

The cgeat sheet is the signs that are made when you make an error.  This mark are easy to understand. Thoose marks are used in drafts. This signs make you realize the mistakes you have. The cheat sheet show error like comas, periods, capitalized Letters, new paragraphs , etc

Late Work

I'm "missing" some work in the project I did not have it in the right section also I had somo wrong things in the character develompment. Also I missed the Antynoms and Synoms!
For all future projects I will meet the deadline and avoid these problems by doing the following... Meeting the deadline by seeing the english class website and I would carefully label my blog

Summative Assement

Pablo
Looks: He is small, dark hair and brown eyes
Talent: Can read exrtemly fast and drinks 2 liters of water in 4.88 seconds
Deep Dark Secret: His older Brother is Gay, and likes the ugliest girl at school.
Best friend: Eddie
Worst Enemie: Pedro Juan
In his pocket carries his cellphone and Wallet.
He recently lost his favorite toy.
He is a normal student and really nice
Comments by Alejandro Samper and Lorenzo Castellanos
What is his Favorite toy? A power ranger
Is he popular? not really has few friends

Exposition:
Pablo has been bullied by Pedro Juan, he has beened bully since he decided he was in love of the ugliest girl(Mariana).(looks, and talent, Worst enemie)
Rising Action:
Pedro Juan is avaible to make the entire grade now Pablos secret.
Pablo stays quite and does not says anthing, however inside he feels terrible and mad.
He is called by the mighty Ramon and is told to try to defend his self.(Ambition, best friend, what he carries)
Climax:
Pablo does what the mighty Ramon tells and the next day he confronts Pedro Juan. When he confronts him Pedro Juan punches him and humillates him. When Pablo stand up he tells what he is feeling .Pedro is not able to respond and walks away(attitude)
Falling Action:
People starts seeing what Pedro did was not good
Pablo starts being popular.
Exposition:
Pablo forgives Pedro
Pablo and Mariana become a couple

Why it i a Myth? 
It a myth because includes gods. If it has gods it shows how people fear to them. It also explain a fenomenal like bullying. 
Bully Problem? 
Pablo secret is revealed and its start to be bothered. He is bothered by Pedro Juan  and after he is bothered, one night the mighty god Ramon arrives and he already new the problem Pablo had. Then the next day the mighty god defend Pablo and made him be respected and never bullied again.
My problems?
I had spelling mistakes. Also I had run on sentences. Therefore I had some punction errors. Also I should get more clear my ideas
Other Bird Tales Comment: 
Camila Toro: I liked you had a really organized story and was clear. Also I liked how you used the pictures to make the story more intersting! Well done!
Paula Jaramillo : I think your story was really good. But you should put some more cool pics! But for the rest you had the elements of the plot well organized.
Daniel Moreno:  Great story! your plot was well organized also Iliked how you made feelings to your characters. 
Why should I get a 4?
Because I did all the necesary and work hard on it. Also I changed my story like 50 times and did not  give up 







jueves, 20 de octubre de 2011

Synomy and Antonomy

1. S. Wind
    A.Piano
2. S.Always
     A. Never
3.S.Easy to pass
   A.Rock
4. S. Hard worker
     A.Lazy
5. S.Delayed
     A. Advancing
6.S. Quiter
   A. Fighter
7. S. Happy
A Sad
8.S. Not sure
A. Sure
9.S. Rivality
A. Friendly
10.S. Thinker
     A. Lazy
11.S. Emo
      A. Happy
12. S. Long
A. Short.
13 S. Sequence
A. disorder
14. S. loud
A. quietly
15.S. Relaxed
A. Stressed
16. S. a prediction
A. to be sure

lunes, 17 de octubre de 2011

For a 3.5 and a 4

Roald Dahl uses in this book his setting and all the elements by narrating his life. He makes you feel interested towards the book/his life.A good thing he has is that he lived a really intersting life. I did myfakewall to show his events.! I could not upload pic!! Still if he had Fcebook during his life time it would look like this.
http://www.myfakewall.com/w/Roald+Dahl_24

Comments in People Project

Mariana Lozano:
I like how you do all the things togethere, and it is well elaborated. But you have alot of mistakes! This mistakes include grammar,puntuction and you should put Caps instead of all in lower cays. Also I think you had to do a different thing in the project.I think you have to tell how does the character changes during the book.
Alejandro Samper:  I like how you do steps to describe. I also think taht is very well elaborated and it is really especific. But I think you are putting to much info. There Iliked how you did the explanation of the plot. It looks like you understand the topic

Comments in People Projectso

Mariana Lozano:
I like how you do all the things togethere, and it is well elaborated. But you have alot of mistakes! This mistakes include grammar,puntuction and you should put Caps instead of all in lower cays. Also I think you had to do a different thing in the project.I think you have to tell how does the character changes during the book. 
Alejandro Samper:  I like how you do steps to describe. I also think taht is very well elaborated and y

Project(1st Quarter Character development)

In this quarter I read the book named Going Solo By Roald Dahl . This book is an autobiography of Ronald Dahl. The book is about he first going to Dar es Salaam working for Shell Oil. Then World War Two breaks out he leaves to Nairobi where the joins R.A.F  where he begins flying training to be able to go to war. After a few months in flying training he crashes in Egypt almost becoming blind. After his recovery he is sent to Greece where he has to fight the Italians which outnumber the R.A.F pilots.

Roald Dahl Develompent :  Since the beginning of the book young Roald shows that he is willing to learn and gain knowledge given to him by different people from different countries and he also loves eccentric and rare stuff this are shown in thsi quote. "All in all, it was rather wonderful for me, a conventional young lad from the suburbs , to be thrust suddenly into the middle of this pack of sineway sunburt gophers and their bright bony little wives, and what i liked best of all about them was thier ecentricities" Ch. 1 pg. 3. In this quote he tells us that this adventure is perfect for him this is shown throught the book becaue of the attitude he has during the events described.  After his first encounter with a snake which was when the deadly black mamba was slithering near Salimu and preparing to attack. After this event he felt really good because he felt he had saved Salimus life by telling him that the snake was behind him, he felt proud about this, but also he knew that he had to become more tedious and careful about snakes becase in this specific part of the world they are deadly. This is shown in pages 30 and 31 in chapter 3. The first quote is "About a month  after the black mamba incident..." This shows that this incident made a big impact on him and then he tells Mr. and Ms. Stanford about it "I told him about the black mamba and Salimu". He is proud to show that he saved a young  lad's life. This examples show that during the book he became a better person and had to defend his life in real life situations.

The author in this book gives some clues to make you predict as an example in pages 117 and 118 Roald Dahl gives clues about his army going to Greece to fight against the Italians. In this case it makes you predict Roald is going to Greece to support his army.
Tone and Mood:
The author gives the tone depending the situation. As an example when Roald sees the chefs wife being eaten by a lion his tone is amused. It was amused because he had never seen something like that. And the mood of the author during the book is that he is intersted and having fun but he is always concerned of what he is doing.

miércoles, 12 de octubre de 2011

The Worst Audience Behaivor is...... and If I where a God I would.....

The Worst Audience Behaivor is.....
Throwing things at the stage/actors because: I think it will distract people presenting . Also it may cause some of the actor an injury. Therefore it may distract the audience making the show lose interest. It is also extremly disrespectful. Also it could cause angry people at the audience becauese they payed to see the function. Last but not least it may cause the actor a nervous break down making the show terrible.
If I where a God I would....
I would fly. Because if you could go to any place that I would like to go. I could escape from problems. I would not have to worry about tardies. I could score goals in score much faster. In the pacer test i would do 100000000000000 laps .And their would be no problem because I would be independt.