Change in my myth and why.

I want to improve my myth because I think I could do it better. The way I believe I can improving this work is by being better at Capilization, puntuction , and being more clear in my ideas, also I may get more details so the work is clear enough. More things I could improve are clearing my ideas when I write for example in many sentences I am missing words because I dont elaborate well my ideas. 
Therefore I think I may also elaborate more the characters so the story makes sense and it becomes longer this are all of the thing I could do so it is a good myth.