My book is based on World War 1 and World War 2. This storyis mostly based on stories that happened. In other words their are no official characters and the document changes subject in every chapter. This story has reminisce of people who know a days remember things that happened during the war. Therefore this book is explained in a mere way meaning the author is neutral, not defending neither the Germans or British.
Through out the book it gives you a a deep thought that you should be graceful of in the conditions you live because the book narrates that soldiers lived in a feverish condition and lived inmarshy areas. War Stories tells you that in those times things were not easy and people ended up ghastly memories. There is a specific story in the book that is about some Russian Soldiers that were snipers and one of them is killed and the memory of the other soldier arehatred towards war.There is a part in the book that shows a picture of besieged around a park in the northern part of europe of people protesting against the war because they hadanimosity towards how long the war had lasted.
I would recommend this book to who ever is interested in the topic of world war 1 and 2. This document is also for all ages because the writer makes in a simple and interesting way. An advantage that this book have is how chapters are based on stories if there is a story you would not like to read you can skip it and you will still understand the rest. The book is really informative and it has plenty of information. The book tells you almost every thing you have to know, like how they used howitzers in the war and how they where available to use cumbersome devices with out making things go worst. There is a part in the story they usesreconnaisse whic makes you understand better the strategy the army is using while you read the book. For last this a great book and you can aptly read it in any place.
domingo, 27 de mayo de 2012
Feed back with Daniela Pedraza 3.5
Daniela Pedraza feed back:
don't use the word book so much times, include some opinions, and don't tell that much of the book so the reader actually reads the book and makes his/her own summary after.
Me on Danielas work
Daniela your work is pretty good and it is informative but still you should put more thing to express.
don't use the word book so much times, include some opinions, and don't tell that much of the book so the reader actually reads the book and makes his/her own summary after.
Me on Danielas work
Daniela your work is pretty good and it is informative but still you should put more thing to express.
3. War Stories Review.
My book is based on World War 1 and World War 2. This book is mostly based on stories that happened. In other words their are no official characters and the books changes subject in every chapter. This book has reminisce of people who know a days remember things that happened during the war. Therefore this book is explained in a mere way meaning the author is neutral, not defending neither the Germans or British.
This book gives you a a deep thought that you should be graceful of in the conditions you live because the book narrates that soldiers lived in a feverish condition and lived in marshy areas. The book tells you that in those times things were not easy and people ended up ghastly memories. There is a specific story in the book that is about some Russian Soldiers that were snipers and one of them is killed and the memory of the other soldier are hatred towards war.There is a part in the book that shows a picture of besieged around a park in the northern part of europe of people protesting against the war because they had animosity towards how long the war had lasted.
I would recommend this book to who ever is interested in the topic of world war 1 and 2. This book is also for all ages because the writer makes in a simple and interesting way. An advantage that this book have is how chapters are based on stories if there is a story you would not like to read you can skip it and you will still understand the rest. The book is really informative and it has plenty of information. The book tells you almost every thing you have to know, like how they used howitzers in the war and how they where available to use cumbersome devices with out making things go worst. The book also uses reconnaisse whic makes you understand better the strategy the army is using while you read the book. For last this a great book and you can aptly read it in any place.
This book gives you a a deep thought that you should be graceful of in the conditions you live because the book narrates that soldiers lived in a feverish condition and lived in marshy areas. The book tells you that in those times things were not easy and people ended up ghastly memories. There is a specific story in the book that is about some Russian Soldiers that were snipers and one of them is killed and the memory of the other soldier are hatred towards war.There is a part in the book that shows a picture of besieged around a park in the northern part of europe of people protesting against the war because they had animosity towards how long the war had lasted.
I would recommend this book to who ever is interested in the topic of world war 1 and 2. This book is also for all ages because the writer makes in a simple and interesting way. An advantage that this book have is how chapters are based on stories if there is a story you would not like to read you can skip it and you will still understand the rest. The book is really informative and it has plenty of information. The book tells you almost every thing you have to know, like how they used howitzers in the war and how they where available to use cumbersome devices with out making things go worst. The book also uses reconnaisse whic makes you understand better the strategy the army is using while you read the book. For last this a great book and you can aptly read it in any place.
2.5 Words organized in Categories.
Categories:
Feeling of hate:
Animosity
Hatred
Resentments
Millitary Words:
Howitzers
Shrapnel
Marshy
Reconnaissance
Bulkheads
Words to do with Crowd
Besieged
Congregating
Word do with sickness
Feverish
Buttocks
Negative words
Luckless
Ghastly
Ungainly
Words that involve Action
Mounted
Charred
Lumbering
Words that meaning is that the stay the same.
Inexorable
Mere
Words that start with A.
Animosity
Aptly
Accostumed
Words related with trouble.
Cumbersome
Words related to the past.
Reminisce
WOrds related to thin stuff.
Sheer
Feeling of hate:
Animosity
Hatred
Resentments
Millitary Words:
Howitzers
Shrapnel
Marshy
Reconnaissance
Bulkheads
Words to do with Crowd
Besieged
Congregating
Word do with sickness
Feverish
Buttocks
Negative words
Luckless
Ghastly
Ungainly
Words that involve Action
Mounted
Charred
Lumbering
Words that meaning is that the stay the same.
Inexorable
Mere
Words that start with A.
Animosity
Aptly
Accostumed
Words related with trouble.
Cumbersome
Words related to the past.
Reminisce
WOrds related to thin stuff.
Sheer
Synonyms for the 25 words. (2)
The words in yellow are were the real word should be.
Reminisce (8): Still
willing to remember for the documentary film makers about events happened that
extraordinary day.
Luckless(pg9): It was not the just the unfortunate population of the battle zones.
Congregating pg 12: People gathered in parks and squares of Europe.
Ghastly:pg16: “The horrible butchery of vain and insane offensives”
Resentments pg18: And there were other long-standing displeasures.
Howitzers pg 19: Artillery( field guns, canons, etc)
Inexorable pg 26: Began an neutral push to the German borders.
Charred pg 27: It would be another 10 or 15 years before the combusted trucks, shell carriages, and tanks were taken by the scrap, and shell holes filled in.
Shrapnel pg 28: Bullets fragments and bones could still be tilled from battle field.
Marshy: 30: A wet area intersected with canals.
Feverish 31: Everyone sick atmosphere, the story of angels of Mons began to circulate.
Mere 34: The tale is the same and a sheer invention.
Sheer 34: The tale is mere and a thin invention.
Hatred 39: In a world of cold, hunger and hate.
Buttocks 43: Whenever a fierce tackle or a strong gust of wind revealed s Scotsman trunk, they would hoot like school boys.
Animosity 43: Other matches were played with a feeling of dislike.
Mounted 46: As causality people where horseback riding.
Ungainly 51: Something so large and so clumsy was always going to be vulnerable.
Cumbersome 52: The also used a troublesome device called orthophone.
Lumbering 57: The trading two seater planes were normally used.
Besieged 63: the village gathered by sightseers.
Aptly 72:The appropriated named Gran Fleet.
Reconnaissance 73: the British strategy of the ships that patrolled Germany waters.
Bulkheads: 82: British ships were protected by walls in the top.
Accostumed: 91: Movies were used to see those type of stuf.
Luckless(pg9): It was not the just the unfortunate population of the battle zones.
Congregating pg 12: People gathered in parks and squares of Europe.
Ghastly:pg16: “The horrible butchery of vain and insane offensives”
Resentments pg18: And there were other long-standing displeasures.
Howitzers pg 19: Artillery( field guns, canons, etc)
Inexorable pg 26: Began an neutral push to the German borders.
Charred pg 27: It would be another 10 or 15 years before the combusted trucks, shell carriages, and tanks were taken by the scrap, and shell holes filled in.
Shrapnel pg 28: Bullets fragments and bones could still be tilled from battle field.
Marshy: 30: A wet area intersected with canals.
Feverish 31: Everyone sick atmosphere, the story of angels of Mons began to circulate.
Mere 34: The tale is the same and a sheer invention.
Sheer 34: The tale is mere and a thin invention.
Hatred 39: In a world of cold, hunger and hate.
Buttocks 43: Whenever a fierce tackle or a strong gust of wind revealed s Scotsman trunk, they would hoot like school boys.
Animosity 43: Other matches were played with a feeling of dislike.
Mounted 46: As causality people where horseback riding.
Ungainly 51: Something so large and so clumsy was always going to be vulnerable.
Cumbersome 52: The also used a troublesome device called orthophone.
Lumbering 57: The trading two seater planes were normally used.
Besieged 63: the village gathered by sightseers.
Aptly 72:The appropriated named Gran Fleet.
Reconnaissance 73: the British strategy of the ships that patrolled Germany waters.
Bulkheads: 82: British ships were protected by walls in the top.
Accostumed: 91: Movies were used to see those type of stuf.
25 words with definition 1.5
Reminisce(8): remember
things of the past.
Luckless(pg9): having no luck
Congregating pg 12: a large mass of people.
Ghastly:pg16: a really scary moment/ being frightened
Resentments pg18: the feeling of displeasure.
Howitzers pg 19: a canon used to hit targets behind a trench.
Inexorable pg 26: Not to be affected by anything.
Charred pg 27: to burn slightly.
Shrapnel pg 28: An artifact that contains Bullets.
Marshy: 30: soft and wet.
Feverish 31: the word describing someone with fever.
Mere 34: Being the same
Sheer 34: Something really thin
Hatred 39: the feeling of hate towards something.
Buttocks 43: I did not understand the meaning(either of the two fleshy protuberancesforming the lower and back part of the trunk.)
Animosity 43: a Strong feeling of dislike.
Mounted 46: riding on a horse
Ungainly 51: Not being thankful.
Cumbersome 52: troublesome
Lumbering 57: the trade of lumber.
Besieged 63: to crowd around
Aptly 72: appropriated
Reconnaissance 73: a search used for military research.
Bulkheads: 82: wall like constructions
Accostumed: 91: Being used to something.
Luckless(pg9): having no luck
Congregating pg 12: a large mass of people.
Ghastly:pg16: a really scary moment/ being frightened
Resentments pg18: the feeling of displeasure.
Howitzers pg 19: a canon used to hit targets behind a trench.
Inexorable pg 26: Not to be affected by anything.
Charred pg 27: to burn slightly.
Shrapnel pg 28: An artifact that contains Bullets.
Marshy: 30: soft and wet.
Feverish 31: the word describing someone with fever.
Mere 34: Being the same
Sheer 34: Something really thin
Hatred 39: the feeling of hate towards something.
Buttocks 43: I did not understand the meaning(either of the two fleshy protuberancesforming the lower and back part of the trunk.)
Animosity 43: a Strong feeling of dislike.
Mounted 46: riding on a horse
Ungainly 51: Not being thankful.
Cumbersome 52: troublesome
Lumbering 57: the trade of lumber.
Besieged 63: to crowd around
Aptly 72: appropriated
Reconnaissance 73: a search used for military research.
Bulkheads: 82: wall like constructions
Accostumed: 91: Being used to something.
War Stories 25 words(1)
Reminisce(8):
Luckless(pg9):
Congregating pg 12
Ghastly:pg16
Resentments pg18
Howitzers pg 19
Inexorable pg 26
Charred pg 27
Shrapnel pg 28
Marshy: 30
Feverish 31
Mere 34
Sheer 34
Hatred 39
Buttocks 43
Animosity 43
Mounted 46
Ungainly: 51
Cumbersome 52
Lumbering 57
Besieged 63
Aptly 72
Reconnoaissance 73
Bulkheads: 82
Accostumed: 91
Luckless(pg9):
Congregating pg 12
Ghastly:pg16
Resentments pg18
Howitzers pg 19
Inexorable pg 26
Charred pg 27
Shrapnel pg 28
Marshy: 30
Feverish 31
Mere 34
Sheer 34
Hatred 39
Buttocks 43
Animosity 43
Mounted 46
Ungainly: 51
Cumbersome 52
Lumbering 57
Besieged 63
Aptly 72
Reconnoaissance 73
Bulkheads: 82
Accostumed: 91
sábado, 26 de mayo de 2012
Change in my myth and why.
I want to improve my myth because I think I could do it better. The way I believe I can improving this work is by being better at Capilization, puntuction , and being more clear in my ideas, also I may get more details so the work is clear enough. More things I could improve are clearing my ideas when I write for example in many sentences I am missing words because I dont elaborate well my ideas.
Therefore I think I may also elaborate more the characters so the story makes sense and it becomes longer this are all of the thing I could do so it is a good myth.
Therefore I think I may also elaborate more the characters so the story makes sense and it becomes longer this are all of the thing I could do so it is a good myth.
My Portofolio and my Passion
Portofolio:If someone people would see my portofolio would think that I am a open person in ideas because my portofolio talks of many different subjects. Also they would think I like sports because there are many pictures of sports in my portfolio also people would think I prefer english and sociales class because in thoose tabs I have the most written parts, and they would think I hate spanish class. There fore my portfolio shows I am simple person there is no rare things and the format is clear and not confusing. They would also would notice my interests, there they could figure out what I normally do on a regular day.
Passion: Things that passions my is playing polo, playing polo is one of the things that passions me. I play polo since I was little and it has always been something I enjoy doing. If you don't know what polo is I am going to explain you, polo is a sport that consist in 2 teams of 4 people in a horse which with a malet they hit the ball to score goals, it is a pretty complicated sport.
In my portfolio it going to be related with polo because every thing I will post it will be related to it. There my pictures are already of polo and most of my work is related to it. Polo is a amazing sports and since I was little I liked it.
Passion: Things that passions my is playing polo, playing polo is one of the things that passions me. I play polo since I was little and it has always been something I enjoy doing. If you don't know what polo is I am going to explain you, polo is a sport that consist in 2 teams of 4 people in a horse which with a malet they hit the ball to score goals, it is a pretty complicated sport.
In my portfolio it going to be related with polo because every thing I will post it will be related to it. There my pictures are already of polo and most of my work is related to it. Polo is a amazing sports and since I was little I liked it.
Input on My portfolio
Paula:For each, class you could describe more the assignment you chose and also in the personal part you are missing your 3 best pieces of work, a paragraph about yourself, and also how have you changed as a learner.
Gaby Peters: I think you have a well based ideas but you should express more with pictures and things you like to do.
Gaby Peters: I think you have a well based ideas but you should express more with pictures and things you like to do.
jueves, 24 de mayo de 2012
Script
NEWS REPORTER (walking around the school): Have you ever felt that you don't want to go to your next class? That you just aren't willing to travel to that boring math class? Well we have and we mean to change it.
Today, students feel unmotivated by the constant boredom of their routine. They feel pressured by their teachers and superiors. Eisenstein Schools plan to change these problems. The routinary schedules are prone to kill multidirectional thinking and train the students to learn linearly in stead of considering multiple possibilities.
Eisenstein Educational Institutes will be a school with a liberty of schedules. This means that the students will be able to manage their schedules and their curriculums according to their interests. Nevertheless, they will require a minimum amount of hours per class in order to get a full credit for the class. As well, during the time given, the students will be required to complete certain accomplishments
In Eisenstein schools, there is one tutor per five students, who decide what they want to learn at the time they want. They can decide what to learn, if they accomplish the minimum tasks and hours they are expected to complete for each class. Ass well, the groups will change on a monthly basis in order to teach the students to collaborate with different personalities.
Off course that this new model of learning would require teachers with a higher level of training, however our school offers a training program that takes 2 months that adapts our teachers to the system of our school.
It has been proved that these learning style is called the Dalton Plan which has been working successfully since the 1800s. Self government in learning programs is also expressed in the Winnetka plan. Gardner's theory of multiple intelligences also applies to this type of learning.
Here we have: (*blank), a student who will share with us a full day in the new school. How are you (*blank)?
(NEWS REPORTER goes into a class and STUDENT comes out with him)
STUDENT: Hey! Thank you for inviting me. Eisenstein Learning Institutes has changed my life as a student, but more important, as a learner. Now I can decide when to learn my classes and to blend my schedule according to my interest.
NEWS REPORTER : What do you think is the greatest advantage of this new school?
STUDENT: I think the greatest advantage is that I can chose who I can work with and collaborate with them. I can also change what I want to learn, according to what I feel like doing in that day, yet I still do need to learn certain things. I can also decide what to spend my extra hours on, and the teacher-student ratio is pretty good since it is 5:1.
Peer Questions and Answere
Will the school be like El Fontan?
Yes, but for elite, smart students.
Yes, but for elite, smart students.
How will you manage the teachers and classes?
A the student needs to have had an appointment with the teacher beforehand.
A the student needs to have had an appointment with the teacher beforehand.
Will you somehow mix subjects?
No.
No.
lunes, 14 de mayo de 2012
Portofolio Outline
Sociales: In this class we learn about Colombian history, politics and economy. Also this class is very opened minded and you may say what you think. Therefore there are alots of debates were you may comment and discuss. I really enjoy this topic because the professor makes it intersting.
Spanish: In this class you learn about grammar, puntuaction and more gramatic rules. Also in this class you read and do works about the subject. In this class we did a tech project about a video of what ever topic we wanted to. My topic was soccer balls.
Math: This class has been hard because we have covered alot o subjects and it becomes every tim more difficult. In this subject we have covered algebra, probability, equations, and famous math workers. We have alot of work in this class.
Social Studies: In this class we have recovered alot of subjects that come from ancient greece, to the byzantine empire and more subjects. In this class we have alot o homework and projects. This class I have learned tons o new things.
Science. This class is one of my favorite classes you learn about atoms, this class is fun because mst of the time you are learning new stuff.
English : This class is awesome you are always making the steps to success this class really fun because it always have new topics. It is also always well planned and the teacher is great because it gives you second chances when you fail so you can success.
Exploratory: PE: This class is fun ecause you do sports.
Passion: Polo is my passion
Spanish: In this class you learn about grammar, puntuaction and more gramatic rules. Also in this class you read and do works about the subject. In this class we did a tech project about a video of what ever topic we wanted to. My topic was soccer balls.
Math: This class has been hard because we have covered alot o subjects and it becomes every tim more difficult. In this subject we have covered algebra, probability, equations, and famous math workers. We have alot of work in this class.
Social Studies: In this class we have recovered alot of subjects that come from ancient greece, to the byzantine empire and more subjects. In this class we have alot o homework and projects. This class I have learned tons o new things.
Science. This class is one of my favorite classes you learn about atoms, this class is fun because mst of the time you are learning new stuff.
English : This class is awesome you are always making the steps to success this class really fun because it always have new topics. It is also always well planned and the teacher is great because it gives you second chances when you fail so you can success.
Exploratory: PE: This class is fun ecause you do sports.
Passion: Polo is my passion
Sitting Sources
Tell what person or company originally owned the image.
A link to the image.
Kind of copyright
A link to the image.
Kind of copyright
Answer Questions
What needs does the change that you want to make address?
The liberty of students, organize themselves, learn to manage their time in order to become more respectful. The concentration of students is solved since they can chose what to concentrate on because of their election.
Why would teachers, students, administrators, and parents be motivated to make this change?
STUDENTS: because they will be able to manage their schedule and decide when. Take free time when they need it.
TEACHERS: they have more motivated students, have a better class.
PARENTS: would be able to program appointments and more time for family time and after-school enriching activities.
ADMINISTRATORS: students will want to enroll in this institute (more $$$) but only great ones will enter. This will make the school elite and an excellent one.
The liberty of students, organize themselves, learn to manage their time in order to become more respectful. The concentration of students is solved since they can chose what to concentrate on because of their election.
Why would teachers, students, administrators, and parents be motivated to make this change?
STUDENTS: because they will be able to manage their schedule and decide when. Take free time when they need it.
TEACHERS: they have more motivated students, have a better class.
PARENTS: would be able to program appointments and more time for family time and after-school enriching activities.
ADMINISTRATORS: students will want to enroll in this institute (more $$$) but only great ones will enter. This will make the school elite and an excellent one.
martes, 8 de mayo de 2012
7 Elements
Point of view
Who storys are telled
Dramatic question
To capture the attetionbs
And has to be answere
Make audience care
Emotion memories feelings helps hold atetation
Voice
Personality
Soundtrack
Sounds effect
Economy
Fast moving
Pacing
Who storys are telled
Dramatic question
To capture the attetionbs
And has to be answere
Make audience care
Emotion memories feelings helps hold atetation
Voice
Personality
Soundtrack
Sounds effect
Economy
Fast moving
Pacing
domingo, 6 de mayo de 2012
My Work This Year
The 3 best things I have done this year where my sociales debate, my science lab work and my english project on my summer reading. My sociales debate was one of the best things I did because first I was really in into the topic and I prepared for it. In this debate I was avaible to win and also earn a 4. This debate was about basic topics that church does not allow.
Other of my good works I did this year was in Social Studies in this work I had to memorize the play of Julius Cesaer death this was a group work and we all memorized and did a great job.Therefore we had to play roles and then improvise, it was fun experience,
For last the other good work was in Math a project I had to about Carl F. Gauss. This project had to be done in Prezi and in a document form, I had an excellent inform and made a great speech, I consider this yer I had done good works .
Other of my good works I did this year was in Social Studies in this work I had to memorize the play of Julius Cesaer death this was a group work and we all memorized and did a great job.Therefore we had to play roles and then improvise, it was fun experience,
For last the other good work was in Math a project I had to about Carl F. Gauss. This project had to be done in Prezi and in a document form, I had an excellent inform and made a great speech, I consider this yer I had done good works .
Obstacles for School
The main obstacles I see in our new school are the following:
- there maybe classes that no one would go in a day, this means organization is going to be tricky.
- If, somehow, a class is not taken into consideration, a whole period of a day will be lost and the student will have to work after hours or in the weekends to solve that problem.
- Irresponsible students will not have any classes planned for the day and, therefore, the whole purpose of responsibility and free schetules will be lost. And this kid most take those classes, they would learn to be organized.
- If a teacher is not available a day, the classes he/she programmed will be cancelled.
My Ideal school
Issue: modern day schools follow a year long routine which can be boring.
Audience: the new school's comunity
Our school should not be a routine, the kids most be free to choose whatever subjects they are interested in. Our school should work by the kids taken a certain amount of classes, as an example in the year take 15 Sociales classes and they can choose when ever they like to take it. Also kids most be free of if they are not feeling well or have issues to take a free period. Therefore teachers most comprehend the kids decission
Audience: the new school's comunity
Our school should not be a routine, the kids most be free to choose whatever subjects they are interested in. Our school should work by the kids taken a certain amount of classes, as an example in the year take 15 Sociales classes and they can choose when ever they like to take it. Also kids most be free of if they are not feeling well or have issues to take a free period. Therefore teachers most comprehend the kids decission
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