Theme is better 3

After meeting with my partner, Lorenzo Muñoz, we realized that we both had great themes, that were precise and made sense with the story, but after putting a lot of thought into our decision, we realized thatmys theme maybe explained a little more the story, or in other words it covered more parts of the story. Even though my theme was good, in some parts of the book it was not applicable. On the other hand, Ramon´s theme almost occurred in the entire story, so we thought that having a theme that covered the majority of the story would be more precise.
The theme that you are who you want to be and not depending in society is better because it gives you more understanding of what is happening in the book. This theme relates to all of the things that occur in the book also the theme shows what a society should not be like. In the beginning of the book, everyone wants to become pretty, but Shay realizes that being a pretty person does not make her a better person. Shay and the other people who wanted to be pretty are an example of the theme you are who you want to be and not having to depend on society. Even though the girls who wanted to be pretty depended on society, they still did what they thought was best for themselves. On the other hand, Shay stayed ugly because she thought it was better for herself and she did not depend on society.