1. On friday I am leaving to Buenos Aires, Argentina to play a polo tournament. This polo tournament is named Potrillos its has over 60 teams. Also in Buenos Aires I will watch el Abierto de Polo Argentino which is the best cup in the polo world. I will be their for 10 days.
2. Tomorrow thursday we the b team in soccer at school have the semi final of the copa Alfonso Casas. We play against Campestre at Campestre school. In the team I am the goalkeeper I hope we win
miércoles, 30 de noviembre de 2011
Figurative Language
Anomatopeia: "pop"
Metaphor: you are my sunshime
Simile: quiet as a mouse
Rhyme: hall, fall, ball
Personification: the lamp sat on the table
Repetion: baby baby bay oooo
Hyperbole: he's the fastes runner ever
Alliteration: peter piper picked a peck of pickled peppers
Assonance: he saw a ball far away
Imagery: appeal to 5 senses to create a picture for the reader
Allegory: poem that has a 2nd deeper meaning. Example: tortoise- the hare represents the kind of people
Understatement: mr grinch you are looking a little green today
Paradox: war is peace. 2 seemingly opposite ideas working together.
Allusion: dont be such a grinch. Make reference to something in another literary work
Irony: Gentelmen you can't fight in here. This is the war room.
When the intended meaning differs from the meaning the word appears to express
Synecdoche: all hands on deck
When parts represents a whole.
Apostrophe. Twinkle twinkle little star ho I wonder what you are
Adresing somethung non human or dead as a human or alive.
Metaphor: you are my sunshime
Simile: quiet as a mouse
Rhyme: hall, fall, ball
Personification: the lamp sat on the table
Repetion: baby baby bay oooo
Hyperbole: he's the fastes runner ever
Alliteration: peter piper picked a peck of pickled peppers
Assonance: he saw a ball far away
Imagery: appeal to 5 senses to create a picture for the reader
Allegory: poem that has a 2nd deeper meaning. Example: tortoise- the hare represents the kind of people
Understatement: mr grinch you are looking a little green today
Paradox: war is peace. 2 seemingly opposite ideas working together.
Allusion: dont be such a grinch. Make reference to something in another literary work
Irony: Gentelmen you can't fight in here. This is the war room.
When the intended meaning differs from the meaning the word appears to express
Synecdoche: all hands on deck
When parts represents a whole.
Apostrophe. Twinkle twinkle little star ho I wonder what you are
Adresing somethung non human or dead as a human or alive.
viernes, 18 de noviembre de 2011
15 facts.
.1Countless wild animals are displaced by urban things and habitat problems, which sometimes lead to conflicts between people and wildlife.
2. Conflicts between animals and humans are cauesed b6y fear or lack of knowledge.
3. Some of the ways in which wild animals are abused or exploited by humans include sport and trophy hunting, commercial and recreational fur trapping
4.Wild animals are also exploited in the exotic “pet” trade, the fur trade, and the entertainment industry.
5.Most Americans are opposed to the killing of wildlife in sport and trophy hunting, trapping, and the fur industry.
6.Each year, more than 2.5 million animals are killed by the federal government on public and private lands across the United States. Close to 100,000 of these animals are native carnivores, including wolves, coyotes, bears, foxes, and bobcats.
7. Asian Elephant had declined 50% over the last 3 generations.
8. Their are animalos as the dodo that have already been exticnt .
9.Their are only 340 Mount Gorrillas .
10. The english wolve was extcint by hunting.
11.Their are only 1411 Indian Tigers left.
12. Javan tiger was exticnt over 30 years ago.
13. The caspian tiger was also exticnt.
14.Global warming affected the seals to make their population to 260.
15. Rhinos are in risk of extinct.
Sources.
http://www.npca.org/protecting-our-parks/wildlife_facts/
2. Conflicts between animals and humans are cauesed b6y fear or lack of knowledge.
3. Some of the ways in which wild animals are abused or exploited by humans include sport and trophy hunting, commercial and recreational fur trapping
4.Wild animals are also exploited in the exotic “pet” trade, the fur trade, and the entertainment industry.
5.Most Americans are opposed to the killing of wildlife in sport and trophy hunting, trapping, and the fur industry.
6.Each year, more than 2.5 million animals are killed by the federal government on public and private lands across the United States. Close to 100,000 of these animals are native carnivores, including wolves, coyotes, bears, foxes, and bobcats.
7. Asian Elephant had declined 50% over the last 3 generations.
8. Their are animalos as the dodo that have already been exticnt .
9.Their are only 340 Mount Gorrillas .
10. The english wolve was extcint by hunting.
11.Their are only 1411 Indian Tigers left.
12. Javan tiger was exticnt over 30 years ago.
13. The caspian tiger was also exticnt.
14.Global warming affected the seals to make their population to 260.
15. Rhinos are in risk of extinct.
Sources.
http://www.npca.org/protecting-our-parks/wildlife_facts/
Critiques in Psa Video
Child abuse
1. What was the topic of the PSA?
Child abuse
2.. What did they want you to think about the topic?
Sadnees sorry for thi child abuse
3 . How did they use what we learned about persuasive techniques to try to persuade you think this way?
It was well done and they had statistcs
4. Describe patterns you saw in the presentation. How was organized and why do you think this ways?
Was well organized and was serious it did not make you feel happy in made you all time paying attention
5. Was the presentation in its goal?
Yes it made you feel pitty
6. An organization and people who havw been abuses
Condoms
1 to use condoms
2. To use condoms to avoid sickness.
3. Gave facts and how to avoid
4. Facts and then examples. It is well organized
5. Kindoff because it was funny at the same time so it was not so reliable
6 . Tv comercial! Show to people who Std
Sweatshops
1. How sweatshops are used
2. Sorry for the kids and make this madnnes stop
3. Fotos and facts
4 short and well organized
5 . They made you fell soryy
6 . To this sweatshops
Lack of Education
1. Lack of education
2.Sorry for the kids and make you think twice about the theme
3. They made you think they were experts
4 . They showed videos and then they explained
5. Yes it was well orgajized
6. Show in tv
Defenders of Wildlife
1. Defend Wildlife.
2 Feel Pitty for the animals
3. They showed that they new about the topic
4. Well organized
5. Yes their was an order
6. Make a facebook page.
1. What was the topic of the PSA?
Child abuse
2.. What did they want you to think about the topic?
Sadnees sorry for thi child abuse
3 . How did they use what we learned about persuasive techniques to try to persuade you think this way?
It was well done and they had statistcs
4. Describe patterns you saw in the presentation. How was organized and why do you think this ways?
Was well organized and was serious it did not make you feel happy in made you all time paying attention
5. Was the presentation in its goal?
Yes it made you feel pitty
6. An organization and people who havw been abuses
Condoms
1 to use condoms
2. To use condoms to avoid sickness.
3. Gave facts and how to avoid
4. Facts and then examples. It is well organized
5. Kindoff because it was funny at the same time so it was not so reliable
6 . Tv comercial! Show to people who Std
Sweatshops
1. How sweatshops are used
2. Sorry for the kids and make this madnnes stop
3. Fotos and facts
4 short and well organized
5 . They made you fell soryy
6 . To this sweatshops
Lack of Education
1. Lack of education
2.Sorry for the kids and make you think twice about the theme
3. They made you think they were experts
4 . They showed videos and then they explained
5. Yes it was well orgajized
6. Show in tv
Defenders of Wildlife
1. Defend Wildlife.
2 Feel Pitty for the animals
3. They showed that they new about the topic
4. Well organized
5. Yes their was an order
6. Make a facebook page.
Game Rule
From 2 to 6 players
Ages: 0 to 136
Idea of the game: The Idea of the game is a sort of way of monopoly. The player who ends with more money wins.
Rules.
1. Everyone roll the dice the one with the highestnumber starts.
2 Their are 46 questions in the board .
3 Every time you land in a question their would be a right way to use the preposition and a wrong way
4 If you choose the right way you have a chance to own the property( Everyone starts with two thousands ramones) if you get it wrong you own The Ramones bank.
Who ever gets the most money wins.
Ages: 0 to 136
Idea of the game: The Idea of the game is a sort of way of monopoly. The player who ends with more money wins.
Rules.
1. Everyone roll the dice the one with the highestnumber starts.
2 Their are 46 questions in the board .
3 Every time you land in a question their would be a right way to use the preposition and a wrong way
4 If you choose the right way you have a chance to own the property( Everyone starts with two thousands ramones) if you get it wrong you own The Ramones bank.
Who ever gets the most money wins.
lunes, 14 de noviembre de 2011
PSA ESSAY
Wildlife is now a days something extremly important for the world.It is so important because we humans depend on it. Wildlife is what makes our enviorment clean. Also If we don't take care of the wild life the world would get dirtier and it would cause more global warning. Therefore in this essay I will show you how can we make this madness stop.
As an example in Africa 10 years ago their where about 100,000 lions. Know a days their are about 14,000 to 18,000. This is a drastical change. Maasai the indians of Africa where one of the reasons that the lions had decreased(they kill the lion because the lion had ate their cows) but now a days they have been teached to take care of them . Therefore they used know collars to protected them better. http://www.maasaitrust.org/lion_collaring_in_kuku_group_ranch/index.html
Wildlife is all types of birds, mammals, insects, reptiles, anphifians, and plants. If one of this spieces disappears the rest while also start to disappear because it is a perfect cycle. Now a days their are over 150 animals in danger of extiction and 3 to 7 habitats that may longer no exsist. Their are many animals you would your sons to see right? As the cheetah, the rhino, the american Bison; All this animals are wonderful would you like conserving them?
If you see people behaviors towards the nature you will now this madness will never stop but I kno w people can do it for this topic to end. If a every person does something good for thisEarth I almost sure this animals would come back the same as 50 years ago.
I hope I was able to convince to keep helping our Earth and be aware how amazing species are getting extictnt.
As an example in Africa 10 years ago their where about 100,000 lions. Know a days their are about 14,000 to 18,000. This is a drastical change. Maasai the indians of Africa where one of the reasons that the lions had decreased(they kill the lion because the lion had ate their cows) but now a days they have been teached to take care of them . Therefore they used know collars to protected them better. http://www.maasaitrust.org/lion_collaring_in_kuku_group_ranch/index.html
Wildlife is all types of birds, mammals, insects, reptiles, anphifians, and plants. If one of this spieces disappears the rest while also start to disappear because it is a perfect cycle. Now a days their are over 150 animals in danger of extiction and 3 to 7 habitats that may longer no exsist. Their are many animals you would your sons to see right? As the cheetah, the rhino, the american Bison; All this animals are wonderful would you like conserving them?
If you see people behaviors towards the nature you will now this madness will never stop but I kno w people can do it for this topic to end. If a every person does something good for thisEarth I almost sure this animals would come back the same as 50 years ago.
I hope I was able to convince to keep helping our Earth and be aware how amazing species are getting extictnt.
Poster coments
Sam Group
1 Interesting: 7
Strong: they showed intersting facts
Weak: they did not show their preposition.
2 Persuasive:8
Strong :they made you feel stupid if you did not use it right
Weak : you did not know what was they were talking about
3Word Choice 6
Stregth:
Weak:
4Style 10
Strenght
Weak:
Daniel Group
Interesting: 9
Strengths: I caught your attetion
Weak: a little bit messy
Persuasive: 7
Strenght : it makes you feel dumb
Weak: You dont understand the baterries
Word Choice 8
Style:7
funny
Mine group
Intersting:9
Strenght : Pictures and colors
Weaknes: a bit lack of information
Persuasive: 8
Strenght: it made you feel peaceful
Weak: had to be more clear
Word choice:10
Strenght : easy word
Weak
Style 10 relaxing
Alejandro samper
Intersting: colorful
Weak:
Persuasive
Strenght
Weaknes
Word choice
Strenght
Weakness
Style
1 Interesting: 7
Strong: they showed intersting facts
Weak: they did not show their preposition.
2 Persuasive:8
Strong :they made you feel stupid if you did not use it right
Weak : you did not know what was they were talking about
3Word Choice 6
Stregth:
Weak:
4Style 10
Strenght
Weak:
Daniel Group
Interesting: 9
Strengths: I caught your attetion
Weak: a little bit messy
Persuasive: 7
Strenght : it makes you feel dumb
Weak: You dont understand the baterries
Word Choice 8
Style:7
funny
Mine group
Intersting:9
Strenght : Pictures and colors
Weaknes: a bit lack of information
Persuasive: 8
Strenght: it made you feel peaceful
Weak: had to be more clear
Word choice:10
Strenght : easy word
Weak
Style 10 relaxing
Alejandro samper
Intersting: colorful
Weak:
Persuasive
Strenght
Weaknes
Word choice
Strenght
Weakness
Style
lunes, 7 de noviembre de 2011
Comercial Analisis
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4rsEnwKrsvc
Style:
The kid was making sure that the man was not going to touch his Doritos and his mom. And it was hilarious.
Voice: The kid voice is angry and threading the man.
P.O.V: The kid is showing he likes to defend the things he love.
Ethos: Shows that he defends something he likes(Mom and Doritos)
Pathos: It is persuasive and the music is kind off creepy. You know something is going to happen.
Logos: The fact is that kids and people loveeeeeeeee DORITOS
Style:
The kid was making sure that the man was not going to touch his Doritos and his mom. And it was hilarious.
Voice: The kid voice is angry and threading the man.
P.O.V: The kid is showing he likes to defend the things he love.
Ethos: Shows that he defends something he likes(Mom and Doritos)
Pathos: It is persuasive and the music is kind off creepy. You know something is going to happen.
Logos: The fact is that kids and people loveeeeeeeee DORITOS
miércoles, 2 de noviembre de 2011
Preposition Picture
About:
1. The book I read for summer was about a girl that her mother dies in a car accident.
2. The homework was about writing sentences with prepostions.
On:
1. On top of the table, there are some books and a pencil.
2. Everthing was on top of the bookshelf.
In:
1. I found my notebook in the box with stars.
2. While I was in elementary school they started to teach me how to do essays.
For:
1. For each quarter of english we have to read a novel and do a project for it.
2. The birthday gift I made for my best friend was really creative.
From:
1. My trip was from Bogota to Colorado and back to Bogota.
2. I received a present from an anonymous person on Valentine´s day.
To:
1. I was going to go to Argentina but the trip got canceled.
2. Before I went to the movies I picked up my friend.
At:
1. Today at school we had an assebly for Classroom Without Walls.
2. At the park we met with my friend´s boyfriend.
Of:
1. In english we were writing an essay of the use of commas.
2. We were under our desks because of the earthquake drill.
Brainstrom
1. Pitty.
Strengh: It makes people be sorry for the loss of animals, and makes them think what can you do for them.
Weakness: We wouldn't focus on how humans depend and need animals.
2. Happiness
Strength: We would show how animals leave happily without humans interacting.
Weakness: We wouldn't show that animals have a dificult part in life in some point.
3. Violence
Strength: We would show how humans treat animals in a very bad way and also the hurt people do to animals.
Weakness: We wouldn't show the organizations that people make to help that prevent it.
4. Helpfulness
Strength: Organization that show how they help stop preventing.
Weakness: We wouldn't show what happens to the animals.
5. Compare and Contrast:
Strength: Shows both parts of the story.
Weakness: Shows only the bad part
Strengh: It makes people be sorry for the loss of animals, and makes them think what can you do for them.
Weakness: We wouldn't focus on how humans depend and need animals.
2. Happiness
Strength: We would show how animals leave happily without humans interacting.
Weakness: We wouldn't show that animals have a dificult part in life in some point.
3. Violence
Strength: We would show how humans treat animals in a very bad way and also the hurt people do to animals.
Weakness: We wouldn't show the organizations that people make to help that prevent it.
4. Helpfulness
Strength: Organization that show how they help stop preventing.
Weakness: We wouldn't show what happens to the animals.
5. Compare and Contrast:
Strength: Shows both parts of the story.
Weakness: Shows only the bad part
martes, 1 de noviembre de 2011
What is Style ?
Style: It means for me how someone uses his ways to express. As an example someone style is what type of music they listen or how they dress.
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