Rough Draft

Rough Draft

Pablo arrived that day from school extremely angry. He was about to cry because at school he had being bullied. He was sick to be called names, and pushed around, all because his ex best friend had revealed his biggest secret. Pedro Juan had practically ruined his life.

It all had started that same week when Pablo had beaten Pedro Juan in a Math Olympics round. Pedro had gotten so mad that he decided to stop talking to him. However Pablo new Pedro his best friend would not revealed any secrets he had. Until that lunch Pablo was enjoying a good book at the library when  3 kids from the window started laughing at him Pablo did not knew what was happening but he did not cared and kept reading. Pablo was super fast reader.

After lunch ended he had a strange feeling that something was wrong. Pablo passed through the hall and saw that everyone was starring at him, he was confused. But then arrived Pedro and shouted as hard as he could to reveal Pablo’s secret. Pablo secret was he had a crushed in the ugliest girl at his grade. When Pedro revealed his secret all the kids inside the hall felt into laughter. In that instant Pablo ran as fast as he could to the bathroom. He skipped the classes he had left and went back to his house.

At his house he was so mad he had smoke going out his ears, he was not capable to believe that Pedro had embarrassed him in that way.  Pablo had no reason to live. But in that moment a bright light appeared in front of him. It was the mighty God Ramon . Ramon was the God of Middle School.

Ramon was talking to Pablo and told him that he had nothing to worried  about that he was going to solve his problems. That next day Pablo went  to school scared to be bothered. At first he was bothered but h remembered that Ramon going to solve his problems. So when he confronted to Pedro Juan he saw a light like the one he had saw when he saw Ramon.

Ramon controlled Pedro and was able to make him apologized, after all Pedro was then recognized as the wimp of the grade. Pablo now knew he had a protection and was never bullied again. He was then boyfriend of the ugliest girl at the grade who then became the prettiest.