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Pablo arrived that day from school extremely angry. He was about to cry because at school he had been bullied. He was sick because he was always called names, and pushed around, all because his ex best friend had revealed his biggest secret. Pedro Juan had practically ruined his life. (PG 2)

   It all had started that same week when Pablo had beaten Pedro Juan in a Math Olympics round. Pedro had gotten so mad that he decided to stop talking to him. However Pablo knew Pedro his best friend would not revealed any secrets he had. Until that lunch Pablo was enjoying a good book at the library when  3 kids from the window started laughing at him Pablo did not knew what was happening but he did not cared and kept reading. Pablo was super fast reader. (PG 3)

   

            After lunch ended he had a strange feeling that something was wrong. Pablo passed through the hall and saw that everyone was starring at him, he was confused. But then Pedro arrived to the scene and shouted as hard that he was able make everyone to listen Pablo’s secret. Pablo secret was he had a crush in the ugliest girl at his grade. When Pedro revealed his secret all the kids inside the hall fell into laughter. In that instant Pablo ran as fast as he could to the bathroom. He skipped the classes he had left and went back to his house.  (PG 4)

   At his house he was so mad he had smoke going out his ears, he was not capable to think that Pedro had embarrassed him in that way.  Pablo had no reason to live. But in that moment a bright light appeared in front of him. It was the mighty God Ramon . Ramon was the God of Middle School. (0PG 5)

Ramon was talking to Pablo and told him that he had nothing to worry about that he was going to solve his problems. That next day Pablo went to school with the feeling that he was going to be extremely bullied. At first he was bothered but he remembered that Ramon going to solve his problems. So when he confronted Pedro Juan he saw a light like the one he had saw when he saw Ramon. (PG 6)Ramon controlled Pedro and was able to make him apologized, after all Pedro was then recognized as the wimp of the grade. Pablo now knew he had a protection and was never bullied again. He was then boyfriend of the ugliest girl at the grade who then became the prettiest.   She became the prettiest because the Ramon give her a touch of beauty. PG 7

Vocabs

1. Percussion: When to objects crash, and it can be also an instrument.
2. Perennial: Something that lives forever
3.Permeate: To pass through spaces
4. Persevere. Doing something if their are obstcales interfering.
5Defer: to postpone
6.Dilatory. with and idea to stop something
7.Elation: being happy
8.Infer: to had being thinking about somthing.
9.Contend: being against a rival.
10. Intent: to have a purpose to do something
11.Imperturable: Is hard to get excited/happy
12.Perambulate: A long travel by foot.
13collate: to arrange something in sequence
14. Vociferous: making a big noise.
15. Detente: Being relaxed
16 Portend: a prediction

Rough Draft

Rough Draft

Pablo arrived that day from school extremely angry. He was about to cry because at school he had being bullied. He was sick to be called names, and pushed around, all because his ex best friend had revealed his biggest secret. Pedro Juan had practically ruined his life.

It all had started that same week when Pablo had beaten Pedro Juan in a Math Olympics round. Pedro had gotten so mad that he decided to stop talking to him. However Pablo new Pedro his best friend would not revealed any secrets he had. Until that lunch Pablo was enjoying a good book at the library when  3 kids from the window started laughing at him Pablo did not knew what was happening but he did not cared and kept reading. Pablo was super fast reader.

After lunch ended he had a strange feeling that something was wrong. Pablo passed through the hall and saw that everyone was starring at him, he was confused. But then arrived Pedro and shouted as hard as he could to reveal Pablo’s secret. Pablo secret was he had a crushed in the ugliest girl at his grade. When Pedro revealed his secret all the kids inside the hall felt into laughter. In that instant Pablo ran as fast as he could to the bathroom. He skipped the classes he had left and went back to his house.

At his house he was so mad he had smoke going out his ears, he was not capable to believe that Pedro had embarrassed him in that way.  Pablo had no reason to live. But in that moment a bright light appeared in front of him. It was the mighty God Ramon . Ramon was the God of Middle School.

Ramon was talking to Pablo and told him that he had nothing to worried  about that he was going to solve his problems. That next day Pablo went  to school scared to be bothered. At first he was bothered but h remembered that Ramon going to solve his problems. So when he confronted to Pedro Juan he saw a light like the one he had saw when he saw Ramon.

Ramon controlled Pedro and was able to make him apologized, after all Pedro was then recognized as the wimp of the grade. Pablo now knew he had a protection and was never bullied again. He was then boyfriend of the ugliest girl at the grade who then became the prettiest.   

Character description

Pablo
Looks: He is small, dark hair and brown eyes
Talent: Can read exrtemly fast and drinks 2 liters of water in 4.88 seconds
Deep Dark Secret: His older Brother is Gay, and likes the ugliest girl at school.
Best friend: Eddie
Worst Enemie: Pedro Juan
In his pocket carries his cellphone and Wallet.
He recently lost his favorite toy.
He is a normal student and really nice
Comments by Alejandro Samper and Lorenzo Castellanos
What is his Favorite toy? A power ranger
Is he popular? not really has few friends

Myth Outline

Exposition:
Pablo has been bullied by Pedro Juan, he has beened bully since he decided he was in love of the ugliest girl(Mariana).(looks, and talent, Worst enemie)
Rising Action:
Pedro Juan is avaible to make the entire grade now Pablos secret.
Pablo stays quite and does not says anthing, however inside he feels terrible and mad.
He is called by the mighty Ramon and is told to try to defend his self.(Ambition, best friend, what he carries)
Climax:
Pablo does what the mighty Ramon tells and the next day he confronts Pedro Juan. When he confronts him Pedro Juan punches him and humillates him. When Pablo stand up he tells what he is feeling .Pedro is not able to respond and walks away(attitude)
Falling Action:
People starts seeing what Pedro did was not good
Pablo starts being popular.
Exposition:
Pablo forgives Pedro
Pablo and Mariana become a couple

Character Development

Character Development is how an Author gives a character it way of being. The character is made to make you feel something towards him. The author shows his attitude to show you how you should feel towards the Character. If for example the Author wants you to show respect to the author. To show that the character should show the character elements like: his best friend, worst enemy, ambition, etc. The idea of the author is to show what the character feels and acts.
Elements Plot:
Element Plot is what the Author does to make a story mood and tone snd changes some details. As an example If the author starts talking about his family been lost in a fire(Series of Unfortunated Events ) you have the clue that the story is not going to be a happy story, also it shows that the tone of the book/story will be sad.

Quizzes

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quizzes/runons_quiz.htm
In this quiz I learned better how to divided to independent Cluases. Also I liked that if you got the questionwrong it gave you and explanation.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quizzes/which_quiz.htm
In this quiz I learned better the use of Which That ad Who. I learned better of how to use those word in a sentence.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/cgi-shl/quiz.pl/sentence_types_quiz.htm
This quizzed helped my to be better identifying types of sentences. Also I find it a good way to study.

Myths

Brainstorm
3 stories
Bullying:
Problem: Bullying, in middle school bullying is a great problem. This myth idea is to stop bullying
Solution: learn to defend yourself, by the person who is the bully gets scared by the gods in this case the mighty God of middle school Ramon.
Setting: School
Elements: People believed in Gods, and they believe if the do not do what the gods asked they they will be punished.
Characters: 6th grader and 8 th graders(Pablo(normal human) and Pedro Juan(bully)Ramon the mighty god
Gossip:
Problem:people inventing from other people
Solution: make them stop,  if not they will be sacrificed to the God of the Word named Johnsi.
Characters: All students in Middle school. The god Johnsi setting: Middle school. 
Elements: There is sacrifice towards gods, there is a god in it.
The Hall
Problem 6th Graders being afraid to cross the 8th grade hall 
Solution: The monster will proctect the 6th graders by changing the route
Characters: Students 
Setting 8th grade hall 
Elements shows places, and gods

Which, Who ,That(Used in which case) Run on sentences:

In modern speech, which refers only to things. Who (or its forms whom and whose) refers only to people. That normally refers to things but it may refer to a class or type of person.
http://englishplus.com/grammar/00000255.htm
Example: I want the ball that was used in the World Cup.
That was the one who owned the house
The girl which needed the math book was looking for it.
A run-on sentence is a sentence in which two or more independent clauses (i.e., complete sentences) are joined without appropriate punctuation or conjunction
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Run-on_sentence
The girl ate pizza then she went home.
The girl ate pizza. Then she went home.

Journal

In middle school many things can happen world wide. As a big example small kids being bullied by bigger kids, therefore little kids now and then have become more suitable to defend them self. Another thing that happens alot in middle school is playing soccer at break with the 8th graders, that is like hell to the small ones because if they take the ball away from a bigger one the only thing they would do is make them fall. Middle school is like a Jungle, in the hall evry one is wild and most of the time it extremly loud.